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Read this picture book online

Read   the  recreated book

↓    HERE     ↓↓

Read   the  1st draft

↓    HERE     ↓↓

What has been

↓  improved   ↓↓

1.   Replace  descriptive lines with "dialogues"

2.  Remove "the end" from the book after consulting published children's picture books

3. Shorten and make the lines concise

4.   Redo the page layout:

 

"How would the page look like if printed out and opened as a paperback book?"

Read the original story

"The Lion Who Wouldn't Try"

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